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For all reading lovers. What do you think of my writing?

Tarek asked:


Chapter one.
The old woman sat at a small rock beside the entrance of the garage. A black veil encircled her wrinkly, brown face and a mauve cloak swayed in the soft breeze at her narrow shoulders. The soles of her feet were black with dust. Last week, she sold her sandals to buy herself a scarf.

Beside her, Adham, her grandson banged his wooden doll against the rocky floor of the garage, where they lived. He looked at his grandma, waiting for a reply to his misdeed.

She held him up, throwing the doll away and walked into the small hut at the end of the garage. Her gait was slow. Her hips moved upwards and downwards as she dragged her feet over the cement stones, implanted in the ground.

The door to the hut was a towel torn at the middle. At night, she had to press its lower edge under a heavy stone to thwart any intruders. Inside the hut, a bed stood against unpainted, grey wall. White sheets spread across the wavy floor, Where Hayam slept. At the head of the sheet, an oven with a dangling door stood, waiting to heat a crust of bread or an expired tuna can.

She sat at the edge of the bed. Her grandson ate at some stale crusts of bread from the floor and after wincing with saliva bubbling at his lips, he spat it out. After some minutes, he fell to his back and slept.

Hayam walked to the window above the oven. It had a wooden door, painted in green. She pushed it and looked at a small pigeon standing at the stone where she sat some minutes ago. It was a beautiful pigeon. Her head was black and as you went lower, her body turned brown and right at her feathery tail it turned nearly purple. It bent down, poking a crust of bread with her peak into, what Hayam thought to be her husband’s mouth. it was so lovely to see such love, such warmth.

Hayam closed her eyes and imagined her husband, Hassan, sitting with her at their farm with the sun rising at the horizon. He would have a quick draught of his brown mug of milk then wash it and make tea for her in it.

“To my beautiful gypsy queen,” he would say as he would bend down, offering Hayam the mug. His green, narrow eyes would sparkle against the faint, light of a candle, as if he was about to cry.

Something stirred behind her. She turned and a hefty man walked into the hut. He wore a shirt smeared with black patches and a plastic, green sandal that failed to cover the black feet and long, dirty nails. Some oily patches between his receding hairs glimmered under the light of the lamp that hung down from the ceiling by a wire. His blue trousers were smeared like his shirt, especially at the knees. It seemed he spent a long time kneeling on them to fix one of the cars at his small shop.

“I can’t manage your son alone, Ramadan,” Hayam said, holding the baby boy from under the armpits and placing him at the bed, against the wall. “Your wife must return. I can’t do everything alone.”

“Mom, I told you. I can’t do anything about it.” Ramadan said, opening the door of the oven and peering into it. “There was a piece of meat right here this morning…”

“I ate it,” Hayam said, “I was hungry…”

“I’m hungry too,” he said, kicking the door of the oven. It closed over the oven, creaked, and clunked back over the floor. “Fine look, Mom. I am letting you to live with me, out of the purity of my heart. You should be grateful. I am not letting you to live in my home to eat my food. You can manage yourself; it is not my problem you are hungry. I’m the one who works, I need this food.”

“And I need someone to be with me,” Hayam said, “I’m alone; can’t you see that.”

“I don’t care,” Ramadan yelled, “I’m not here to stay with you; I have a family to feed, I have a wife waiting for me.”

Ramadan felt a warm, bony hand at his shoulder. “Am I not a part of your family, boy?”

“Take your hands off me,” he jerked his shoulder and Hayam withdrew her hand; her fingers outstretched towards her son’s body.

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drugs and writing. cocaine—poem. criticism/opinion needed?

elDICE asked:


Locura Nights (Nights of Craziness): Meeting the White-Lady

Met a crazy white-lady, she
cast wicked incantations in our mentes
promised
instant dreams
wondrous illusionary a.m’s
to homeboys and me.

Her name…was cocaine
She came, stealth-like on stale-nights
when homies and I…use’ta
sit in my garage—kickin’ back
like laundromat-insomniacs
enjoying, “Open-24-hr” warmth.
We sat, crammed up among junk
drinking, tradin’ tales of locura nights past
young-suicidal-winos loving…all that’s bad.
She arrived, equipped to revive
our drunk’n…driftin’ minds
delivered in powder
Induced through holes in rolled-up dollars

credit cards cut rocks
(emptied from dime bags onto cd-cases…scattered)

slice ‘em
dice ‘em
real nice…‘m—flyin’!

Met a crazy white-lady, she
came whisking by—high
above on wooden broomsticks.
shooting up nose-holes
flicking chemical switches
snappin’ eyes wide open
boom! Shot, eyes red
stagnant blood—stopped.
Inside brain’s remains she’d dance
forebodingly
sprinkling snow, besieging me
keeping me
stuck—sandwiched in white walls

Till’ I’d…creep…crawl
quick, out a half-open garage door

homeboys right behind me
a bald-headed, white-Nike-wearing army
shadows on black-asphalt grew tall
marching, fiercely
Under krylon-grey
spray painted clouds
strollin’ down
desolate alleys
unafraid
feeling brave-mob-rage
fists clenched
chins up, challenging
anybody
down to get down
hoping
for a chance to defend our
brown…down
ghetto-superman
manhood.

Met a crazy white-lady, she
made a real loco out of me.

Garage Door Automation

For everyone out there. What do you think of my writing?

asked:


Chapter 7.

Mirkanda walked in the garage as Tim stood propped against the tree in front of their house. She knocked twice on the wooden, white door of the garage and it flipped open.

Tim turned at the creaking voice of the door of the garage. As Mirkanda walked in, Tim peered at his father’s car that stood in the middle of the garage with some iron boxes scattering all around it. The yellow light of the garage fell over the car’s red color, and went in through its small windows. The car was so small that Tim thought it resembled a matchbox.

“Come in…” mirkanda said from behind the steering wheel.

As Tim went in beside mirkanda, he thought whether he needed anything for his journey. But he didn’t’ know where they were going. He felt that sooner enough he would return home safe, but the cold, violent look that mirkanda gave him as she revved the engine did not approve his opinion.

The car wheeled off and mirkanda took full speed as they started to reach the main road, on their journey to kerf’s magical shop.

Halfway through the road, Tim went down to buy a can of cola, but as he paid the man, something steered behind the grass to his right. Tim shivered a bit, then took his cola, and ran back into the car.

He did not mention to mirkanda the eyes that he noticed peering at him from behind the grass. “You’re just imagining…,” he told himself as he leaned over the leather bound backseat, heavy and tired.

Tim struggled for some time with his heavy lids. He wanted to keep his attention on the road with mirkanda, but eventually he failed and fell asleep.

He dreamed. He found himself standing in a dark room. As he walked through the room, he collided with a table, and then he heard the clatter of a glass as it fell and rolled on the ground. His heart began beating faster when he saw a small flame walking forward in the darkness. He could see some parts of the candle and the hand holding it. However, he could not see the face of the one holding it.

“Who are you?” Tim shouted in his loudest voice. “Show yourself.”

Tim backed forward as the light of the flame came forward towards him then suddenly the voice of his father spoke.

“It’s me Tim,” Mr. Denver raised the candle against his face and his wrinkled, sandy face shone under the yellow fire.

Tim’s mouth dropped. “father.” he walked forward, smiling at his father. He felt that he needed to touch his father’s soft, warm skin, so he ran at him, but before he could hug him, his father vanished and reappeared behind him.

“You can’t touch me Tim.” Denver said, “You’ve to be dead to touch me, I’m sorry.”

Tim’s eyes welled up, as his father walked forward towards him and smiled.

“Tim, you must keep the amulet safe. It’s your responsibility now.”

Everything vanished in a rolling, dusty fume and Tim woke up again. The car violently before it came to halt.

“Let’s go…” Mirkanda said, getting out of the car and standing in the middle of a dark street. The only source of light in the street was a thin yellow light that poured through the front window of a shop. It was kerf’s shop.

it’s for ages 9-12.

(it’s unedited so try to be merciful)

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For everyone who likes reading. What do you think of my writing?

Tarek asked:


Chapter one.
The old woman sat at a small rock beside the entrance of the garage. A black veil encircled her wrinkly, brown face and a mauve cloak swayed in the soft breeze at her narrow shoulders. The soles of her feet were black with dust. Last week, she sold her sandals to buy herself a scarf.

Beside her, Adham, her grandson banged his wooden doll against the rocky floor of the garage, where they lived. He looked at his grandma, waiting for a reply to his misdeed.

She held him up, throwing the doll away and walked into the small hut at the end of the garage. Her gait was slow. Her hips moved upwards and downwards as she dragged her feet over the cement stones, implanted in the ground.

The door to the hut was a towel torn at the middle. At night, she had to press its lower edge under a heavy stone to thwart any intruders. Inside the hut, a bed stood against unpainted, grey wall. White sheets spread across the wavy floor, Where Hayam slept. At the head of the sheet, an oven with a dangling door stood, waiting to heat a crust of bread or an expired tuna can.

She sat at the edge of the bed. Her grandson ate at some stale crusts of bread from the floor and after wincing with saliva bubbling at his lips, he spat it out. After some minutes, he fell to his back and slept.

Hayam walked to the window above the oven. It had a wooden door, painted in green. She pushed it and looked at a small pigeon standing at the stone where she sat some minutes ago. It was a beautiful pigeon. Her head was black and as you went lower, her body turned brown and right at her feathery tail it turned nearly purple. It bent down, poking a crust of bread with her peak into, what Hayam thought to be her husband’s mouth. it was so lovely to see such love, such warmth.

Hayam closed her eyes and imagined her husband, Hassan, sitting with her at their farm with the sun rising at the horizon. He would have a quick draught of his brown mug of milk then wash it and make tea for her in it.

“To my beautiful gypsy queen,” he’d say as he’d bend down, offering Hayam the mug. His green, narrow eyes would sparkle against the faint, light of a candle, as if he was about to cry.

Garage Door Automation